I did become distracted multiple times because of incorrect pronoun usage. For example, “I’ll send Redcrow back after he drops Dr. Harris and I off at headquarters.” There were several other similar instances with two or three different pronouns, as well. Other than those occasional grammatical disruptions the story flowed very smoothly.
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